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Twenty or Less...#41

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-09-01 05:21 PM

Protective

Wary

Lest
The mainstream
Fade

My reality

(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-09-01 07:56 PM

Wow! I don't understand this one at all, but it sounds ominous.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2001-09-01 08:01 PM

This one is good....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-09-01 09:11 PM

I like this..and I do believe I am starting to understand them, right Mark?

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-09-01 09:18 PM

Hm, interesting, can you explain it further? I think I have it, but not sure.
S

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-09-01 10:21 PM

Virginia and Sandra, I'm picturing simply this: I'm guarded so as not to lose my identity/individuality to "the flow"/peer pressure/society/insecurities/Fear/deception...

Thanks, Connie...

Enchantress, thank you, but you tell me -- are you starting to "understand" them? (Hint: there is no "one correct answer" -- only subjective impressions and interpretations... that's what makes writing these and reading everyone's responses so much fun!)

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

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