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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-09-01 02:50 PM

Alone

            Drifting

In a sea of
            Remoteness

                   Solitude Island

A stoney facade

Unresponsive
To my flotsam encroachment

               Forbidding estrangement

(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-09-01 04:13 PM

Hmm, deep and pondering. Good stuff.
Sandra

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2001-09-01 05:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra -- pun intended, of course, with "deep", right? ;->

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-09-01 05:23 PM

Deep.....I guess I have to dig in ....to feel all that
"Forbidding estrangement"....and all that is behind it......

Thank you
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Grubbymitts
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since 2001-08-30

Posts 37
UK

4 posted 2001-09-01 05:30 PM

v. cool

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-09-01 07:37 PM

My Melody: I guess that depth is relative to the point of view from which it is perceived, but by all means -- dig in!

Glad you enjoyed, Grubbymitts.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-09-01 07:54 PM

I instantly saw Easter Island staring at you, daring you to enter that realm

You are probably going for the more metaphorical, but that's where you took me.

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

7 posted 2001-09-01 10:24 PM

Virginia, that's actually pretty awesome, because that's basically the same thing I was picturing while writing this, although it has MANY layers of depth to it with each re-read and perspective shift.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

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