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Open Poetry #15
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DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
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Monticello IN
0 posted 2001-08-30 10:51 PM


Have you ever seen a smile
that filled you with glee
And then seen eyes above
the smile that warmed Thee

The combination of which
energize your very soul
If you saw them not again
you would never be whole

Ages are the hours and
and eons the whiles
That keep my away from
such beautiful smiles
© Copyright 2001 Don Furr - All Rights Reserved
Alan
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since 2000-09-12
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1 posted 2001-08-30 11:06 PM

I like this one. A very good read. I have seen a smile that did that to me and I did get lost in the eyes
alan
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2001-09-01 08:02 PM

the right smile can light your way...and change your path...helen
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
3 posted 2001-09-01 08:45 PM

Well put. I really like that last verse. Keep it up.

Tracey
Denise
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4 posted 2001-09-01 10:59 PM

Very nice, Don! I liked this very much!
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