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walker
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0 posted 2001-09-03 04:44 PM



Do you know who I am
when you reply
words to console my heart?
Don't try to understand me
that's not why I write
Just give me your hand
In the right moment
support
can last a lifetime
Thank you all
for all you do
Being there
corresponding
When loneliness
kicks in
and poisons the heart

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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1 posted 2001-09-03 05:04 PM


What a lovely, sad write. Glad you shared it

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
2 posted 2001-09-03 06:34 PM


walker - here's my hand if you need support - thankyou for the emotional read.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2001-09-03 07:01 PM


I feel the same way, thank God for this place, and a few people who understand. A poet is a lonely person, sometimes.. often even.
Peace.
Sandra

mirror man
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4 posted 2001-09-03 07:32 PM


Yes, support is the key, I believe.  Very good.
Duncan
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5 posted 2001-09-04 01:11 AM


hey walker...you rock!
Zinsser
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Calif.
6 posted 2001-09-04 02:42 AM


Do you know who I am?
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I write about stuff like that alot even tho I don't share those....
Good write!

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