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walker
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0 posted 2001-08-31 08:54 PM

Once
I was falling
and woke up in your arms
The sweetness of you
seduced me
Once
in a glass house
we lived happily
Love shielded us
Now
I want it so bad
to have it all
again
with you
but can't.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 08-31-2001).]
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Denise
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1 posted 2001-08-31 10:28 PM

"Once" can be very sad. Great expression of loss.
Duncan
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2 posted 2001-09-01 12:21 PM

Even if you can't go back, maybe you can still go forward...together.
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with you
3 posted 2001-09-01 11:46 AM

I'll just echo Duncan   exactly  
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