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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-08-31 02:55 PM



Let Me

I would like to be a butterfly...
And come along for that ride
Over the hard and into the wind
Breathing in life as you fly.

I could be resting upon your heart
You can make me your love's tattoo
Then always I'd be along for the ride
And travel life's roads with you.

~Wynter..remembering


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 08-31-2001).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-08-31 04:18 PM


Butterflies are lovely
so is this poem
May I go along for the ride?

Alan
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right next door
2 posted 2001-08-31 07:27 PM


this is beautiful NT. You make a butterfly even more special now.
alan

Duncan
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3 posted 2001-09-01 12:43 PM


I could be resting upon your heart
You can make me your love's tattoo

Is cool the way you put that.  I don't like needles, so maybe I could get one of those 'stick-on' tatoos. lol

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