Open Poetry #15 |
As Days go By |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Raindrops falling gently down the windowpane, washing off the dust of summer days Nature’s cleaning up her canvas once again, We’ll soon be witness to her splendid ways... Summer’s drawing to a close, we see the change, the greens show signs of Autumn in their hues And as we watch, her canvas starts to re-arrange, the colors, on display for all to view... She paints around intrusions made by human kind, their busy-ness does not affect her pace Slowly and with subtle ease, what’s left behind, is now replaced by Autumn’s golden face... The palette’s gone, all colors used, the painting’s done, so Mother Nature sets it out to dry And those with watchful eye will see that Fall’s begun, with canvas set to change, as days go by... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Sunnyone..you write almost as good as mother nature paints. Really enjoyed this. alan |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Beautiful flow and sure enough despite mans worst efforts nature won't stand interference. Very nice. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nad I know SOMEONE who cannot wait for autumn to come..perhaps there is a hint of that in this beautiful poem. Sandra |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sunnyone- This is great I love the fall, this is a good reminder that things will change hopefully for the better (for me). Thanks for this one, it really cheer me up. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sunny, This is breathtakingly beautiful... Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
autumn comes again. . . and with it. . . it brings the change. . . great job Sunny. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny I am going to miss seeing the autumn this year (because of my move to Florida), but thanks to you I am enjoying all of the colors in your beautiful words. Great Job Sis! A |
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