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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2001-08-31 07:15 PM



Another night
it's off to bed
persistant thought
of things unsaid
No unache
for aching head--
I tell me lies.
I say you're dead.
Loneliness
inside a tomb,
burning wax,
to war the gloom
and one for hope,
an embryo,
That I am love,
that yearns to grow,
these walls I kick--
a loving womb...
insistance taunts
the rise of bread.


I wish that you were here again.
I wish too much again my friend.



(a repost...I am trying, my friends...smile with me please?)


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Alan
Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499
right next door
1 posted 2001-08-31 07:24 PM


Serenity...this is so heartbreakingly sad. Beautifully written. Keep trying little lady.
You will make it
alan

Tracey
Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
2 posted 2001-08-31 07:38 PM


Oh this rings so true. How beautifully said.

I tell me lies
I say your dead

and

I wish too much again my friend

I love it

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-08-31 08:49 PM


Loneliness
inside a tomb,
burning wax,
to war the gloom
and one for hope,
an embryo,
That I am love,
that yearns to grow,
===========================

Mirrors baby...so many mirrors...
hearthugs me twin
me loves ya

"Failure is not in the falling down ...
it is in the not getting back up"


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