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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-08-31 04:13 PM

Visions

horizons played
with imagery
perhaps a bit of
life’s mockery
alluding to my
fond illusions
making yet
grand intrusions

vantage points
of open plains
watching rise
and fall again
cloud’s formation
study close
see lost nations
no need of word
verbose

darkened silhouette
of blackened braids
Indian maid
caught up in wind’s
tirade,
shapely form, her
arms outreached
as if in prayer,
or a beseech

slowly all of
gravity begins a
dark depravity
her figure spins
a slow transpire
as time leans
toward quagmire

from young
she’s seen,
catapults through
decades, careens
by ages thus
before my eyes
winds cuss
materialized
disgust
of plights of
nations
and loss of
stations

slowly, slowly
her visage
creates a way
to new passage
of woman old,
gaunt, lightens,
white
thus shapes
as buffalo
pass in the
night

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-31-2001).]

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2001-08-31 05:31 PM

Hmm..
No one has found this beauty yet? They will now!

It looks like you put some time into this, and is beauitful.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2001-08-31 05:33 PM

Wow!!

*smiles*

~Tier

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-08-31 09:02 PM

darkened silhouette
of blackened braids
Indian maid
caught up in wind’s
tirade,
shapely form, her
arms outreached
as if in prayer,
or a beseech

slowly all of
gravity begins a
dark depravity
her figure spins
a slow transpire
as time leans
toward quagmire

from young
she’s seen,
catapults through
decades, careens
by ages thus
before my eyes
winds cuss
materialized
disgust
of plights of
nations
and loss of
stations

slowly, slowly
her visage
creates a way
to new passage
of woman old,
gaunt, lightens,
white
thus shapes
as buffalo
pass in the
night
========================

you will already know that I will be sharing this one with a friend...
very well done poetess of insight
jm

"Failure is not in the falling down ...
it is in the not getting back up"

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-08-31 11:00 PM

Ahh, many visions we see, and many we hear, but mainly it is the ones felt from the seeing..you have done well here, very well, indeed..very gentle smile

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-09-01 11:42 AM

you've found one of my most favorite things to do, see things in the clouds! Hours and hours at a time with the kids or alone, then we make up stories about what the clouds really are

This is one for me to keep!!

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