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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-08-31 01:21 PM

I'm Guilty

Pounding thoughts of Summer's fate,
the way we were of want in wait.
A pretty heart I have for you,
whenever eyes produce their blue.

Confused, a me that carries warm
a thousand moments, still the storm
in memory, torments the dreams
of shadowed loving, needs that scream.
I fear the worst, hold back the tears
as night in flight, suspends and sheers
the layers, soft, exposed for you
whenever eyes produce their blue.

The moon holds promise in its glow
but lost I am, when dark does show,
removing shadows spent by you
whenever eyes produce their blue.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-08-31 01:34 PM

Confused, a me that carries warm
a thousand moments, still the storm
in memory, torments the dreams
of shadowed loving, needs that scream.
I fear the worst, hold back the tears
as night in flight, suspends and sheers
the layers, soft, exposed for you
whenever eyes produce their blue

I've read this over several times...it sings, though sadly. Good write.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-08-31 01:39 PM

seems to be of sadness..and yet...it's more a wistfulness, Duncan. Thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

3 posted 2001-09-01 09:06 AM

Guilty of being vulnerable? Your poem is wisped and aerated in confession, which we all have fallen, and keep falling for those that storm our passion. Very beautiful.

Sincerely,
Regina

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-09-01 09:20 AM

This sings such a lilting melody of wistful thoughts. I could pick out the lines I like best-but I like them all so much. Beautiful

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

5 posted 2001-09-01 10:59 AM

I too am guilty of this. Wonderful read little lady
alan

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-09-01 11:27 AM

Wynter,
A wonderful write, enjoyed the read.

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