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Our Book Of Love
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Our Book Of Love |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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A book of love I have written about the love I feel for you Our first chapter began when our love was brand new You'd bring me flowers and light up my life with your radiance and your charm In chapter two you so effortlessly swept me off my feet as you romanced me on the beach at sunset You told me you loved me as our fingers interlaced by the edge of the water You took me to heaven as we made love under the light of the moon Throughout chapter three our love continued to grow How much we'd thrive within each others company as love elevated us to greater heights and being together became our top priority Chapter four sees us together forever like two peas in a pod We snuggle together on the couch watching old romantic movies as you wipe away my tears and kiss my wet cheek I smile at the way you fuss over me and kiss you long and deep The magic still remains as love's embers burn ever so brightly My heart still skips a beat whenever you call out my name and your sweet kisses warm my soul even after all this time Our passion will never die as our chapters of love know no boundaries and our love story has no end Suetang |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Suetang, what a lovely love story. I hope the chapters continue and this becomes a novel. ME |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is beautiful. I hope to see more of this. alan |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
This is so nice and romantic. I wish you happiness to write chapter "Evermore". Melton |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah! The beautiful warmth of lasting love....there's nothing like it!! Wonderfully written I enjoyed the entire book and keep it alive forever! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, what a lovely way of looking at love. Here's to the never ending story.  Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sue, What a lovely piece of writing. I can only pray to fall in love like that some day. Dawn |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful storybook. You are so lucky to have so many chapters of love. May the story never end. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Looks like I never got past chapter 2...James |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
As you have discovered, it's one book that never ends, well done! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Ahhhhhhhhhhh...so romantic, I love it! Janette |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A dream to savour... a memory to never forget. One more wonderful chapter to the definition of Love, ala Suetang... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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