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Open Poetry #15

Hey You

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-08-31 03:26 AM

Hey You

Not sure if you are aware
or even if you care
how thin the ice is
you are skating on.

My position remains clear.
I've had it up to here.
Stop wasting my time.
You are stepping
out of line.

And for crying out loud
you are taking way
too much time
to get off
of my cloud.

Jameslee
August31,2001
Two'sACrowd

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2001-08-31 04:00 AM

hey hey you get offa my cloud! Boy do I know what you mean! Great one here! I loved it!

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-08-31 07:12 AM

Ah yes, been there.

Enjoyed the read

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2001-08-31 08:08 AM

Ahhh, you wanna keep it all to yourself uhhh

Great poem

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-08-31 08:08 AM

nicely done ... boot em off if they won't move..

I enjoyed!

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-08-31 12:33 PM

A fresh departure from your traditionals, with a message containing a need to be heard -- hope it gets across...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

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