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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

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0 posted 2001-08-31 01:58 AM

I miss your name
moving from my lips
to voice
your love
moving from my heart
to soul
I miss every word of you
spoken
before either of us
could think better

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

1 posted 2001-08-31 02:25 AM

I love this!

Cindi

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

2 posted 2001-08-31 02:51 AM

How sad Duncan

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2001-08-31 08:10 AM

I'm called 'Titia' remember

Lovely verse

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-08-31 08:11 AM

again very nicely done... love this one!

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-08-31 08:24 AM

Duncan, we seem to be in a similar space. I even miss MY name, the way he said it..Sad story, hm?
Sigh
Great write, powerful in few words.
Sandra

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

6 posted 2001-08-31 08:53 AM

Awww

This was so sad.
Hope things look up.

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2001-08-31 09:04 AM

Duncan,
Missing can be a good thing some times. Enjoyed.

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

8 posted 2001-08-31 09:25 AM

I am so very glad I didn't miss this...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-08-31 09:28 AM

beautiful feelings, Duncan

~Wynter

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

10 posted 2001-08-31 09:49 AM

Oh, this is good!! Enjoyed it...and I feel it too.

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

11 posted 2001-08-31 10:01 AM

Heart felt, the lost passion has almost brought tears.

A wonderful write and well enjoyed.

Rick

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

12 posted 2001-08-31 10:55 AM

I miss your name .....

I miss every word of you.....

------------------------

I loved this.....soooooo much.
And wanted to show it to a friend but feared he'd say he misses that too....

A really wonderful write....

Thank you
*************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

13 posted 2001-08-31 08:47 PM

Duncan- This is very beautiful, it's love at its best, pure, honest and probably eternal.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2001-08-31 08:55 PM

So open, so honest, so sad....well done.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

15 posted 2001-09-01 10:16 AM

Excellent...short and sweet, yet it spoke volumes to me...words I, too, can relate to.
Janette

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

16 posted 2001-09-01 04:46 PM

my goodness this is romantic

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

17 posted 2001-09-01 05:08 PM

Concisely evocative in its heartfelt honesty... Very moving and memory-triggering. Well done.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

18 posted 2001-09-01 05:36 PM

*Soft Sigh*

beautiful!

~Tier

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

19 posted 2001-09-01 07:20 PM

"before either of us
could think better"

the heart wrenching suffering of love lost....helen

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

20 posted 2001-09-02 07:04 PM

I miss every word of you
spoken
before either of us
could think better

Never have I read anything so REAL.
Beautiful in every way.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

21 posted 2001-09-02 07:09 PM

o yuh is all i can say

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

22 posted 2001-09-02 07:14 PM

Sad and beautiful all in the same vein!

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

23 posted 2001-09-02 07:19 PM

Duncan:
I agree with everyone - very sad and beautiful. I know how you feel and only wish you the best.

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

24 posted 2001-09-03 01:40 AM

So much emotion in so few words. This is beautiful

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

25 posted 2002-11-24 08:45 AM

Duncan...time for a repost.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

26 posted 2003-01-12 04:50 AM

this is an awesome write, I love the short powerful ones!

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