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arthur
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0 posted 2001-08-15 05:45 AM




What am I , an idle thing?
A mere dream in time
As fragile as the gossamer wing
But what I am is thine

Little i know of most things
Yet love can outlast time
Stronger than an Angels wings
And what i am is thine

© Copyright 2001 michael bennett - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-15 05:51 AM


Arthur~
Welcome to Passions !
Nicely done ... and we LOVE angel wings fluttering here.

Pull up a quill and stay awhile~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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shadow of the fall
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2 posted 2001-08-15 06:23 AM


nice, thank you for a great poem
Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-08-15 08:47 AM


Lovely...gentle..soft as angel wings.  
Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-08-15 08:52 AM



You will most definitely NOT be idle if you spend any time here...

Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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5 posted 2001-08-15 08:55 AM


Welcome to pip.
Love is the most powerful force in the universe.May the force be with you.

paladin

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6 posted 2001-08-15 08:58 AM


nice piece... I enjoyed
ShannonM
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Drifitng
7 posted 2001-08-15 01:02 PM


Short and sweet expresssion.

ShannonM

cpalmer
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8 posted 2001-08-15 03:04 PM


Welcome to passions!
This is wonderful...I love the wording...beautifully said!
Hugs
Cindi

CMGrimm
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9 posted 2001-08-15 10:52 PM


Great post and welcome to pip...looking forward to reading more from you.

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



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10 posted 2001-08-15 11:04 PM


What a great poem!

You certainly (as the old expression goes) have a way with words.

Nancy

We know what we are, but not what we may be. - Shakespeare
          

Logan
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11 posted 2001-08-16 12:03 PM


Welcome to Passions, with a very good first write..let there be many more..gentle smile
Suetang
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12 posted 2001-08-16 12:24 PM


arthur
I thought your words were beautiful.  Welcome to Passions.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

Martie
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13 posted 2001-08-16 12:28 PM


arthur--I enjoyed your poem very much...welcome to Passions!
Cerenity
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14 posted 2001-08-17 10:35 PM


Hi Arthur,

Welcome to Passions, hope you enjoy your stay and this is wonderful look forward to more of your work.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



SmittenKitten
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15 posted 2001-08-17 10:41 PM


There is no such thing as being idle when you are in love    your heart is just full of activity!

Very sweet write Arthur, look forward to more!
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

KaziaRose
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16 posted 2001-08-18 12:55 PM


Beautiful little write arthur...well done
~Kaz~

A mellifluous muse lies within this poet

1slick_lady
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17 posted 2001-08-18 02:26 AM


beautiful write...Welcome to passions...helen
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18 posted 2002-10-20 02:53 PM


Arthur~
Looking through the archives for some 'first posts' ...
found this lovely penning by you~
Again ... I would say just how much I like it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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passing shadows
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19 posted 2003-01-12 04:50 AM


a definate thinker...very nice
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