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sometimes I cry in the rain
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sometimes I cry in the rain |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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 sometimes I feel so blue the endless nature of my sadness brings me to despair sometimes I cry in the rain but the rain only hides my sadness as my tears fall within their droplets and noone seems to know or even care for that matter why should they, they don't feel this blue day as I the dark deepening despair that takes over like the fog in the night creeping in with an uneasy eeriness that soon consumes me whole so I stand out in the rain, tears flooding down my face and the rain hides it all too well sometimes I cry in the rain......... Graphic from fullmoon graphics Copyright FMG Love is the life of the soul... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
me too...the rain hides a lot...nicely done ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks Wynter for stopping by and for your reply, appreciated ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Aw, my dear friend, I care an very much so. This one just aches with loneliness and sorrow. I hope things are ok for you. ((((hugs)))) Lone Wolf All writing comes |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
My dear LW thanks for your caring, everything is very much OK with me, sometimes something just triggers a very sad and lonesome piece and it just longs to be written which I've done. Thanks hon for your concern but at the moment I'm fine  ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice..and yes the rain does hide many tears.... I enjoyed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Wonderfully inspired piece~ You wrote the desolation and despair nicely~ Pleased to know it's somebody else's shade of blue~ *Hugs* to you gal~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
tracie66, I'm a 'rain' type of person and find it to be healing, I enjoyed your thoughts and have been there before |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
It's raining today, but I feel no sorrow...shall have to wait to cry the morrow... well done Little one... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Cpat Hair Hi I'm so glad you enjoyed thanks for your comments~HUGS~ Tracie Margie girl I'm so pleased that you thought this wonderful, and yes thank god it's not really how I'm feeling, although I have felt that way many a time. Thanks Margie for your friendship ~HUGS~ Tracie Chelsea Thanks for taking the time to check this out and for your comments I appreciate it ~HUGS~ Tracie Lady In White~ Appreciate your reply...thanks alot ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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darabeth Junior Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 33 |
Very nice poem.There are alot of gifted people here.I have enjoyed the many talents of all the poets and yours is one of them. Dara Beth |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it looks like the rain has inspired much in everyone my friend. . . . well done, and very heartfelt. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
As the BeeGee song says "when I wanted sunshine I got rain"...James |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Crying in the rain.......indeed, it would hide the tears. I wish I could do it someday.... It seems that rain is causing so much sadness lately..... Thank you **************************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
daraBeth~ Thanks so very much, for your lovely comment and for taking a look at my piece ~HUGS~ Tracie Sven~ Hiya yes the rain does that sometimes and we are getting our fair share of it at the moment...can't complain though as it is much needed rain here. Thanks for stopping by my friend ~HUGS~ Tracie James Michael and aint it so....thanks for you reply, I appreciate it. ~HUGS~ Tracie MyEnchanted_Melody~ Indeed it hides it well....thanks for your reply and for taking the time to stop by. ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured this sorrowful scene beautifully Tracie ... the visual you've left me with, will stay with me a very long time. Very nicely done indeed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Kit you don't know how much your reply means to me...a big thankyou for the lovely comment...THANKS ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sorry just testing my cookies |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
many thanks J.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, me too! |
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