Open Poetry #15 |
Wishing I Could |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wishing I Could Wish I could fly Like wings of a dove To land there each day Share you my love Wish I could bring A smile to your face To land there each day With open embrace Wish I could reach On the clouds ride To land there each day To sit by your side Wish I could deliver Bright stars above To land there each day Neath sparkling love Wish I could speak My longing desire To land there each day To share and inspire Wish I could arrive To show you I care To land there each day I wish I was there ! Hope |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I loved the simplicity in this! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
HopeS - close your eyes and dream of what could be, and it may... Very nice write, and flowed very well... BC |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
I liked this very much. Thanks for sharing God Bless, Jeremy |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
those feelings are held so often by so many about those for which they care well done, in a simplistic way, which is what caring really should be |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HopeS~ 'Wish I could deliver Bright stars above To land there each day Neath sparkling love' I just adore the sincerity of your gentle words~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
come on yuh i like this so come on! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Hope..soft and tender.. ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
HopeS- Such lovely thoughts you've penned. Much enjoyed. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
soft and gentle...i love the thoughts alan |
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