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Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

0 posted 2001-08-30 05:49 PM

Red wine passes by my soft lips
a crystal glass sits by my side
soft swirls of cigarette smoke waft upwards
nicotine dulls my mind

A numbness penetrates my body
alcohol liberates my mind
no feelings of love adorn me
Emotionally I am blind

No worries in my land of drugs
no hassles to wear me down
just sleep, blur, and smiles
a furrow caused by my frown

Life has never felt better
yes I care, but keep it inside
for once I gave my heart
and once I was taken for a ride

No pity to stir my feelings
no emotion with tints of gold
A man, I am indeed
a woman I'd die to hold.....
Richy-

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-08-30 08:33 PM

your words touched me...

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-09-01 05:37 PM

Well, you won't find them sitting in your chair dear

Nice write

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2001-09-01 06:05 PM

enjoyed reading this...

~Tier

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-09-01 10:18 PM

Dark, sad, moving. It touched me.

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

5 posted 2001-09-01 11:32 PM

I really like this,
I know that must sound morbid.
But this was written very very well!
The emotions are expressed really well,
and I can't help but like it sad or not!!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-09-01 11:37 PM

Hey Hollowman welcome to Passions......

I see you've picked up on the advantages of hiding behind substance abuse...Well, it's a great way to write about the despair of your feelings and you did that very well here!

I hope you find that woman to love and to hold
Have a nice day ethome

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

7 posted 2001-09-03 11:21 PM

Hollowman,

There may be yet another, Sir
so do be careful of the blur.
You may miss her invitation
lost in your inebriation.

Krawdad

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