Open Poetry #15 |
Just thinking |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
People live together but do we know them well or are we just assuming we do appearing it is not that true People work together but do we know them well if someone needs our care are we truly willing to share People believe together but do we know them well brotherhood is what should be but holy wars is all we see People talk together but do we know them well do we listen in such a way that we hear what they've to say Maybe if we could stop to be less superficial we would see that although we thought we knew we really haven't the faintest clue We should really take more care We should really try more to share Cause if we really think it's worth We have a chance to a peaceful earth A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Much Wisdom Titia.....thank you! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
GOOD THOUGHTS..AND A LOT OF WISDOM.. NICE POST.. I ENJOYED! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Words of wisdom are spoken here, Well done Titia Charisma |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Beautifully written Poem with a very true message. Alan |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
So true Titia, most people aren't close. People need to reach out more often and give this human stuff a chance. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Titia, Well written, wise and true and I thank you. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 08-30-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks for your replies, it was a Dutch oldie wich I translated. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Titia, One who looks pass the outer shell finds the true meaning of life, love and happiness, wonderful wisdom shining through in this beauty, so very much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Just thinking...you must be one of the kindest people I've ever come across. |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
It is a busy world out there and I'll bet when the shadows are long and we look back we will see this importance. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is just so very very true. And how well you put it too. Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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