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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-08-30 08:34 AM

I wake again with tear filled eyes
to truth that you have gone away
With mustered strength I do not cry
but carry on to face the day.

Each night you haunt me such as this
dreams that you still are by my side
It couldn't have been our last kiss
that ice cold day you said good-bye.

I feel it still, you know it's true
our love affair is not just lies
you think of me as I do you
and yet I sleep alone to cry.

My love your distance matters not
Somewhere in Time we have been caught.

I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind. I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time (3 Doors Down)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-30 08:40 AM

such sadness and longing in this... nicely written...

I do hope the longing and the loneliness leaves your life...

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

2 posted 2001-08-30 08:41 AM

...My love your distance matters not
Somewhere in Time we have been caught...

A moment that can never be taken away- I like this a lot.

Melton

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Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

3 posted 2001-08-30 08:42 AM

Sandra, this is a style I am still trying to master. Such sadness in it. You've done a great job.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

4 posted 2001-08-30 08:39 PM

Sandra,
Beautiful....And "Somewhere In Time" you will be together again...

Love, Elise

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

5 posted 2001-08-30 08:48 PM

Sandra, that was beautifully done, much sadness. The future is the key.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2001-08-30 09:29 PM

Beautiful. I've been there, (still there). You summed it up beautifully.

Tracey

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

7 posted 2001-09-02 12:14 PM

Beautifully written words...I can feel the sentiments so strongly...Dang girl, you are sooooo good at expressing deep feelings!

I am confident your time will come...I pray that it is soon....

Janette

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

8 posted 2001-09-02 12:35 PM

Nicely done.
"My love your distance matters not
Somewhere in Time we have been caught."
...gets you wondering and wandering...

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