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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
Broken Crotched in this empty bottle the image seems to blur Can I etch another smile and drag myself away from her? She was the crismon moon the star of each starless night I still hear her call my name; the wind moves on an angels flight. I glimpsed upon her shadow, I stumbled threw the dry rain I thought I heard her tears? No, it was only my broken heart. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Daniel, such a sad write. Now who needs to hold on to their smile?  I look forward to reading more of your work.Once again welcome to Passions. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She was the crismon moon the star of each starless night I still hear her call my name; the wind moves on an angels flight. I glimpsed upon her shadow, I stumbled threw the dry rain I thought I heard her tears? ================= an aching write ... wonderful employ of imagery to express the emotions with intensity. very well done poet sir!! jm Well I looked to the sky for my anthem |
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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
... thank-you for your kind word! But in this time though we are far, I hope and pray that all involved in the tradgey that has evolved in the US, will find peace and comfort in each others arms. |
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