Open Poetry #15 |
Tell Me |
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Tell Me Look into my eyes, Tell me what you see? Is the world a rainbow, Or are you following me? Where might I be going, Where may I have been? Could you be a shadow, In my deserted den? To understand this poem better click here [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 08-29-2001).] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Lost Dreamer, you showed another dimension with the picture. Quite disturbing in a way. But I liked it. ME |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
GLORIA!!!!! how wonderful to see you and with such fine, concise verse...... geeezzzzz..... great writing here, my friend... where ya been? ...... more! please! missya hope all is well |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very interesting click to explain the poem. Great idea ...good read! |
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