Open Poetry #15 |
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Color Me Blue |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Today is a blue day Color me blue, moving to green Better than the grey Stark like the fog on the moor Fog which distorts yet hides the pieces Pieces scattered everywhere The mirror has cracked from side to side "My doom" indeed was upon me Who am I? Who.. who?? Where? Lost in the fog without landmarks Only safe here inside my little cave Deep within the hollow hills Hollow like my soul. Pepper |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
P35~ wow.....I love this....wow.... ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PepperMint~ You certainly conveyed the blue~ Very nicely done~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Oh blue is one of my favorite colours, like purple too You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it. |
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