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To say "Good-Bye" (acrostic) Title inspired by a poem by SEA, with same title |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
To say "Good-Bye" Throat tied in a knot Out of words to say Sensing the one you Adore, has to go away You try to hide your feelings Guiding and wishing them well Outpouring emotions Obscure your true Desires for them to stay Bringing the words to your lips You start to cry and hesitate..... Ending up not saying the words "Good-Bye" [This message has been edited by Amature2 (edited 08-29-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sometimes, you just can't say good bye, it hurts so much, and you love them so much. wow,  I am honored to have inspired you in any way. This touches deep, as I know these feelings personally. I'm keeping this ok? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amature2~ Very effectively executed. The continuity of thought is excellent~ Good show !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
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Thank you SEA, yes you may keep this. Thank you Marge. |
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