Open Poetry #15 |
Transcendental Love |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
My heart falls in love so deep when I finally fall asleep You find your way into my dreams and I am lost to you it seems All my wants and all my needs all my wishes and romantic seeds Blossom into midnight fantasy with you here, in love with me Under magic of miraculous moon you touch my soul I give way to swoon Lavender perfume fills my night with you in my garden holding tight With but a look into your eyes you still my heart in mesmerize Sweeping me in slow melting dance touching from small of back to nape of neck….. ~ entrance ~ Lost completely to the feel of you sublime each sway and dip I pray for more time Every second spent with you, is absolute bliss and I give myself, to you in kiss You lay me down on bed of flower slip inside, and give your power Morning will come, this dream will fade but I’ll always remember, this transcendental love we made ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 08-29-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
love on another plane. . .would it still be love? of course. . . very wonderfully done SEA. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
You took the words right out of my mouth. And with great beauty I might add. I've often felt this way. Great work |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Lovely....... Beautifully expressed ......and you are lucky to feel that way...... Thank you ************************* "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
MY OH MY OH MY.... MMM MMM MMMM ... any words that my mothy mouth could say would be wasted.... this is very very cool....Id of like to have seen hubbys face when he read this one "oh you speak to me in riddles |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven~ thank you very much Tracey~ welcome! glad you liked this MEM~ thanks Janet~ yeah, actually, he loved it as it was a dream I had of him that inspired this cold medicine makes for some wild dreams LOL ~SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Very romantically presented. The graphic is wonderful. *smiles* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully sensual!! Love it! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I do believe this to be one of the prettiest poems you've ever penned.... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sea, I just love your writing. So soft and beautiful and tender and romantic... I can go on I liked it.. alot. TaraB |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
You write awesome lovepoems Sea, and this one is no exception.....love it!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very romantic and lovingly sensual, beatiful write SEA. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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