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DestinysCharm
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 90

0 posted 2001-08-29 11:21 AM

Loving You

You showered me with kindness
Right from the very start,
An acceptance of me, for who I was,
And not who you wanted me to be.
You opened a door of friendship
That was welcoming to step into,
A bright and shiny corridor,
Into your soul.

In the beginning just a simple online friendship,
But, my heart you were grasping,
Before either of us knew.
A window opened,
And you were there like a breeze
Tickling my senses,
And showing me that I was important,
Not only to myself,
But to so many others especially you.

Together we ventured past our insecurities,
Dove into a relationship of Love,
With all eyes wide open.
You have given me more than I could ever want,
More than I could ever repay,
More than even I deserve.

Loving you is like,
That tranquil feeling one gets when
All in life is cosmically balanced.
In life it doesn’t happen that often,
But with you it’s a constant frame around by being,
Protecting me, guiding me, inspiring me.

The bank of your love,
Is a direct deposit to my heart,
And always will be.

You are my castle built of so many rooms,
That can accommodate each and every one
Of my moods from one day to the next.
Each rooms decorum, a sampling of the kind,
Generous, sweet, patient, and gracious man,
You have proven to be.
If the world stopped revolving tomorrow,
I know that I would be content in your arms,
Wherever we would be.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

1 posted 2001-08-29 04:47 PM

But with you it’s a constant frame around by being,
Protecting me, guiding me, inspiring me.

The bank of your love,
Is a direct deposit to my heart,
And always will be.

You are my castle built of so many rooms,
That can accommodate each and every one
Of my moods from one day to the next.
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A lovely wonderful out-pouring of the heart.....written with clear senserity....

I'm surprised that people have missed it....

I look forward to read more of your work...

Thank you.....
**************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-08-29 06:41 PM

now this is very well done. . . honest, heartfelt. . . with a wonderful flow and it's a joy to read. . .

excellent work my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-09-03 03:48 PM

ok. . . this needs to go back. . . it's too special to be back here. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-09-03 03:53 PM

DestinysCharm~

'The bank of your love,
Is a direct deposit to my heart'

What a wonderful thought !
Thank you for sharing~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

5 posted 2001-09-03 09:25 PM

DestinysCharm,

This is a beautiful expression of love for your loved one. He is very lucky to have you in his life.

Dawn

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2001-09-04 02:25 AM

Love well spoken....

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

7 posted 2001-09-04 03:12 PM

That was a great poem.. It reminds me of my husband and myself.. we went through the same thing...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2001-09-04 03:16 PM

To be accepted for who you are and not what someone wants you to be....that's love...that's it. Very nice.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

9 posted 2001-09-04 05:24 PM

A beautiful poem my friend. I'm so glad you found Love.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

10 posted 2001-09-04 08:34 PM

A beautiful statement about the man in your life. Great read.
alan

DestinysCharm
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 90

11 posted 2001-09-05 09:28 AM

My thanks to all of you for your wonderous replys to my poem, and a double thanks to you Sven for bringing it back for viewing.

I'm glad you all enjoyed what I wrote for the man whom I love dearly, and have been with for a year now. I presented him this poem for the occasion.

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