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Open Poetry #15

Coroner's Dark Room

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-08-29 02:29 AM

There was this slight pressure
that followed a manical moment
preserved in lighted agony
for all to enjoy over again.
The view sang out of a prism
which hit the backing just right
falling foward and back
all in perfect harmonous chaos.
The light gave way to mirth
that angle that was tried
played out for your amusement
would fetch a willing prize.
Then waters clarified the eyes
bringing to us a perfect life
that does not breathe a moment longer
and is filed away for later use.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-08-29 09:43 AM

I'm trying to put the title and the poem itself into a neat little package, but you always squirm around and take me another direction....

so I'll just have to come back to read again!

Nice to see you Michael...it's been awhile!

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

2 posted 2001-08-29 08:35 PM

This is a very interesting and unique point of view. I enjoyed it very much. Maybe because it reflects my point of view on this issue also. Great write.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

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