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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-08-28 09:16 PM


You Are Hereby Authorized

it is hearty to decree
a sanction to lessen misery
a give and take
it’s so decried
to wipe those tears
from your eyes for

You Are Hereby Authorized

to come and go as you
please,
to live a life with grace
and ease
to be hearty in your
desires
to live until you can
retire,
and then you might realize

You Are Hereby Authorized

to know that big is big
and little is small
that short is tiny
and long is tall
to have opinions
as you may, then
realize you may have
a day
of surprise

You Are Hereby Authorized

that in the best of
all your tests
that in the rise
of your surmise
that in the glean of
your serene
everyone must live
a life, be it animal
child, husband
or wife

You Are Hereby Authorized

to give a smile
while you feel gray,
smile a mile so you may
brighten up your
gloomy day
in reflections that come
back at you,
in all you say,
and in all you do,
and in this vastness
of surprise,

BELIEVE, for

You Are Hereby Authorized


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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1 posted 2001-08-28 09:26 PM


Ahh, Sis, what a wonderful write..Enjoyed it very much, as I can relate to most...very gentle smile
Alan
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2 posted 2001-08-28 10:16 PM


Beatuiful Read Sunshine. enjoyed this one alot
alan

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3 posted 2001-08-28 10:50 PM


Nice piece, sunshine.  Well-spaced repetition always draws me in.
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4 posted 2001-08-28 11:02 PM


this is wonderful...gave me a smile...helen
Martie
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5 posted 2001-08-29 01:56 PM


Karilea--Wonderful and uplifting!  You are hereby authorized to write more.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-08-29 04:57 PM


Very nice Sunshine...James
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7 posted 2001-08-29 05:02 PM


Beautiful done!!

Love it a lot  

((Hugs))
Charisma

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8 posted 2001-08-29 06:56 PM


Dear sweet Sunshine, I hereby declare...

You Are Hereby Authorized

for someone who  writes such beautiful poetry should be  

Titia

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9 posted 2001-08-29 08:36 PM


Great advice, Karilea and great poem!
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