Open Poetry #15 |
Where Shall I Begin |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Where Shall I Begin I once knew a woman that kissed me so good that I would kiss her forever if only she would. Nearly a year has gone by since I kissed her and gazed into her lovely eyes. Still I miss her silky touch and romantic tenderness. Still I yearn for the taste of her sweet lips. Yes I fell in love with her smile and her kiss. In my eyes her beauty was impossible to resist. How do you let go an of angel no longer there? Where shall I begin to erase the warm feelings that once filled the air? How can I pretend that I no longer care? Will my heart ever find a heart with true love to share? If only it could be my pleasure to share her love again. Alas she seems to have no new kisses for me so where shall I begin? Jameslee@August29,2001 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful bittersweet write of longing SBJ theres that old saying... the only way to get over an old love is to find a new love... words of wisdom....easy to say..harder to live out, I know.... one day at a time SBJ...one day and poem at a time jm "oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
one day you will get over her, and find a new love. Just as JM said, easy to say, and harder to live out, but its so true....one day you will see. ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, The above is good advice, I enjoyed the read. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh this is sad. And I agree with janet..but sometimes you never get over it for it is a memory that is strong. So we must learn to accept it as a good memory not a sad one. Nicely written -------------- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this much |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
where you always do. . . with yourself. . . for that is where love begins. . . well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
James, I feel for you, I too, cannot begin to forget someone so special to me. But the love in your heart shines through, and that is a gift in itself. Sandra |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great poem, full of love. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sad...but well done. You will get over her and...smile when you think of her. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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