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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-08-29 01:17 AM

Night Of Pathways

Colour the pathways
Dreams are waiting
Thoughts take to sky
Among stars creating

Mind sails the ocean
Charting with love
Dream filling nights
Beneath stars above

Land ships to shore
As palm trees sway
Stars light the sky
Upon a moonlit bay

Awaiting as we land
A cabin by the sea
Indulging pleasure
Desires and fantasy

The glow of firelight
Held in your arms
Night was fulfilled
Of magical charms

Night of pathways
Over sky and sea
Togetherness love
Dream capture me

Hope©2001

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-08-29 02:47 AM

HopeS~
What a pretty rhyme~
Gently flowing~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2001-08-29 11:29 AM

Thanks for taking the time to read Marge and giving your kind response,its appreciated
Hope

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-08-29 07:41 PM

Very lovely, Hope. My favorite dreams, of palm trees, and moonlight and love. Nicely done.
Sandra

Gwendrina
Junior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 33

4 posted 2001-08-29 07:43 PM

Hi Hope,

A unique title followed by a lyrical verse that sways the reader into a sense of beauty and passionate dreams. Truly, a pleasure to
read.

Thanks,
Wendy

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

5 posted 2001-08-29 07:57 PM

'Colour the pathways
Dreams are waiting
Thoughts take to sky
Among stars creating

Mind sails the ocean
Charting with love
Dream filling nights
Beneath stars above'

This is a beautiful write, and these lines in particular struck something with me...excellent job, HopeS!! I love this!

sp

tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2001-09-03 01:10 AM

HopeS-
   I really enjoyed this lovely little write.
   Very nice.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

7 posted 2001-09-03 01:16 AM

awesome yuh gave me a good feelin

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2001-09-03 01:19 AM

Thanks to you all for your sweet , kind replies
May all your dreams have light !!!
Hope

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