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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Lost in the depths of this dream, never wanting to wake for fear of losing you. Lost in this love we make, adrift in the sensual delight your kisses bring to me. Lost in the rhythm of your voice, where one word is enough to set me trembling. Lost in the man you are, the romantic, the tease,the dreamer all there in your eyes. One look, one kiss, one word And I'm lost...lost in loving you. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
wonderful way to get lost |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I have heard similar words and experienced these emotions. This dream was a reality, for a while, but then I woke up and am still left in a haze as to its existance... its memory more vivid than any other reality experienced. What a moment you have captured, Paula. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Wow...what better place to be lost! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
mmmm....makes me want to get...er...LOST?  positively dreamy! |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
how passionate!! these words are burnin... wonderous write and i hope ya forgot your compass. "You gotta love livin 'cause dyin's a pain in the ass." |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Very nice imagery here, Paula, very gentle smile, may the dream last for a long time |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Paula...James |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sounds like a good place to get lost... nice.. I ejoyed |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Mmmm Yummy!!! Like this..... Thank You |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I really like this one! Too cool!  Sauni Sauni :) |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Whew! Throw the map in the back seat... I'm going for a nap!  Glad to see you're still here and still writing so well! Trev. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ 'Lost in the man you are, the romantic, the tease,the dreamer all there in your eyes.' If you find me ... pretend you don't see me. I could get lost in this very easily ! Beautiful, sweets. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
VAS...yes isnt it...thank you.. Mark...its a lovely moment out of time...thanks JLR...hmmmmm cant think of any LOL...hugs girl serenity...oh you...LOL you are ALREADY lost...teehee...hugs Ethan...so nice to see you...oh yes I definetly left the compass at home ... Logan...I'm hoping its a lifetime dream fer sure...thanks friend James...glad you do hugs!!!! Cpat Hair...its a very sweet place to be lost...thanks... Zinsser...thanks... Saunni...thanks sweetie glad you did... Trev...oh its so good to find your name again ...lol gonna get lost huh?Marge...Oh I dont think I will have eyes for anyone else LOL...thansk sweet lady |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I almost missed this. Glad I didn't Not a bad place to be lost ... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I loved your flow....very nice work!! Nathan |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Prettily romantic |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, isn't it wonderful to feel like this? You captured it so well. If only it wasn't such a rarity in oue lives. Very beautiful thoughts. Sandra |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is beautiful, soft and sweet. Enjoyed the read alan |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
all there in your eyes. the loving comes through, deep in blue Lady Ollyne ~sighs~ thank you for a lovely feeling... Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (edited 09-02-2001).] |
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Wes Utica Junior Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 28California |
You present a truly diaphanous world with words to match. I think everyone is lost except for you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Paula this is such a wonderful poem of devotion and love. It is seasoned with loyalty and genuineness. I think it's wonderful work!! Ta ta Southern belle! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Passionate Paula, this is delightfully teasing me, since I haven't anyone to hold onto! O, it will happen. Some day I'll get good and lost, and I'll be too busy to write. NOT. Kacy |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
vandana...thank you Interloper...I'm glad you find it a nice place to be Nathan...you always make me feel good about what I write...thank you thecraig...thank you sir Sandra...Yes it is sad its such a rare feeling...but OH when you do find it...how it lights up your world!!!! Alan...I appreaciate your replies...thank you vandana...you are so sweet to read this twice...thankyou Lady Ollyne...its easy to show the love when it fills me so...thank you Wes...you are right...Im not lost at all. I am right where I want to be..thanks ethome...ah my sweet NB poet man...how like you to see the whole picture...thank you Midnitesun...it happens...sometime it seems to take forever...but it does happen...thank you Tommy Lee I love you...thanks for your inspiration, your freindship, your love... |
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