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Sounding Memories ( as requested by a friend)
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Sounding Memories ( as requested by a friend) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I know the words The ways The times Still they are hidden Far from prying eyes Distanced from Searching minds Sometimes they sing Sirens song Coaxing me closer To shoals I do not Navigate well in darkness Sweet softness In the melodies and tune Belies the treacherous Too many hulls breached Too many days dry docked I listen when they sing But rarely sing Along |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I like the extra spacing between the stanzas...they make me feel as if each thought is not given up freely, but with reservation.... a true conversation of sorts, as if you were talking with someone...allowing space between comments.... and there is a mystical quality about this that pleases as well... Enjoyed... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CPatHair~ Very nice, indeed ! A lovely flow of thought~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Hmmmm...Perplexing and still very intelligible. Like today's music. I felt you were leading me in that direction. I hope I understood you. Sincerely, Regina |
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