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Dust and Stone |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Dust and Stone She holds me in a web of love Like the sea and the stars above Five tentacles that sway my mind Five senses that limit my blind. I try my best to understand The touch of eternity’s hand Savor of forever’s flavor Understand and never waver. How many life times does it take? To wash upon its shoal and wake To close my eyes in dogmas blind To the tentacles of my mind I stand upon this passing shore And pass into the evermore. To eternities ever change Yet still to me an ever strange. I am alone upon this throne And I will dust upon its stone. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She holds me in a web of love Like the sea and the stars above Five tentacles that sway my mind Five senses that limit my blind. I try my best to understand The touch of eternity’s hand Savor of forever’s flavor Understand and never waver. =============================== To eternities ever change Yet still to me an ever strange. I am alone upon this throne And I will dust upon its stone. ================================= Sweet Sy-babes...you sit upon wisdoms throne and you my dearest poet of cadence cool and vision beyond... will NEVER be dust ... rainbow confetti perhaps but not dust   Your poetry etches you upon the evermore engraves you in time's eternity and paints your portrait upon our hearts and memory. Dont doubt me Stinky (ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis) *winkiewinkie*  meFeels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How fair that printer's ink will bind these treasured passings of your mind... Yes... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
and I ....I am in awe after your words of love here...... Charisma |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're NEVER alone around here, dear Sy.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Perhaps our dust will pass and mix Affix in the winds dynamics And we will sail the silent braille Of future poets, inhale, exhale. Love ya Sy Sunshine, Beautiful comment, *L* Charisma, Thank you sweet. Nan, Not as long as your around, thank you love. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
quote: could you be any cooler???  *winkiewinkie* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you for the Kiss. Love ya Sy |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This is elegantly scribed. Almost Shakespearean in its reach. Very wonderful Seymour. Sincerely, Regina |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seymour this is very nice writing.....I love these kinds of verses..... "I try my best to understand The touch of eternity’s hand Savor of forever’s flavor Understand and never waver. How many life times does it take? To wash upon its shoal and wake To close my eyes in dogmas blind To the tentacles of my mind" Great lines of searcing thoughts.....great stuff my friend!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Regina, Wonderful comment, thank you. Ethome, Delicious flattery, thank you. |
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Ava'sEden Junior Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 16Far&Away |
Someone that savours such as this could never be dust upon any stone. I think you have and will roll thru many hearts. Ava~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fascinating read...I love the rhythm and flow and that last line is especially thought provoking |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ava'sEden, Lovely response, thank you. VAS, Thank you for the read and understanding. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Wow now that is beauiful You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it. |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Moon Dust, Now that is wonderful. Snoog, Thank you, thank you, thank you. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
How many life times does it take? To wash upon its shoal and wake To close my eyes in dogmas blind To the tentacles of my mind This is incredible and I am completely humbled by your talent. |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
She holds me in a web of love Like the sea and the stars above Five tentacles that sway my mind Five senses that limit my blind. Beautiful words of yearning, Seymour. "the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fantastic expression, Seymour! Wonderful writing! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy , Once again gotta agree with all the above , however ( there's always one of them or a " but ", the last line being out of meter tends to throw me , unless that was your intent . Doc |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, You are very kind and I humbly thank you. Citizenx, I humbly thank you too. Denise, And I thank you with *L* Dr.Moose1, The chapel of religon is a simple stone. |
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