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Sunrise Blues
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Sunrise Blues |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sunrise this morning painted azure with rose to fill the eyes in glaring soft with portending change I have watched the artist in brush strokes on canvas create such illusions yet my own hands seem meant for rougher work Turned bolts or sawn boards numbers lined in rows mundane mechanicals that do not show the beauty I see Sunrise this morning streaked the sky with hues while I watched and felt the shades of blue |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
So inspirational.... still seeking silver and gold panning his delight thank you for this lovely imagery... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh you do have such a way of taking the reader into your world.....nice work on this.... |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
Cpat sometimes beauty can't be captured only watched an appreciated. That is what makes it so special no word or brush stroke can fully capture the feelings that beauty creates. BUt darn it you made a fine attempt. enjoyed this alot. "the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nothing wrong with feeling and watching shades of blue...because as John Lee Hooker sang...."The blues will heal ya!" Very enjoyable write I enjoyed the reasoning within! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
what a beautiful picture you paint with your words....beautiful!! Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CPatHair~ 'Sunrise this morning painted azure with rose to fill the eyes in glaring soft with portending change' Yes .... and your words paint it just as I see it~ Beautiful~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I loved this a lot, Cpat! But surely there is still beauty in what you can do/create with your hands, for hands that can not even move or feel would be so much a contrast. Maybe I can liken it to the way the soil feels to my hands. I really have a hard time digging in the dirt with gloves on as I love to feel the soil, its coolness on a summer day down where the moisture lay, the texture as it sifts through my hands. The way I can shape it and plant in it, encouraging things to grow, that is surely beauty in its doing. Things you make with your hands, though they may seem mundane because of a repetition are still beautiful in their having been crafted. Shake one hand with the other, feel the comeraderie, the union of purpose. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
But of course the artist is not in the brush, but in the heart and from the soul. Truth in pigment or in words. And here we have the words. \\ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely, lovely, lovely, just lovely! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Turned bolts or sawn boards numbers lined in rows mundane mechanicals that do not show the beauty I see Sunrise this morning streaked the sky with hues while I watched and felt the shades of blue' Superb imagery, cpat hair...I especially relate to this, being I am trying to find just what it is in life I am supposed to do, and make it something semi-creative...I truly appreciate this...excellent write! sp  tried to write a letter to tell you how I feel, but all I kept on writing was slipping on the tears from the day... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 08-29-2001).] |
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