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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan 
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Split Views A split disaster Inside of me One forms a mushroom cloud The other a tree One burning heat The other a growing seed The reaction of molecular details Singes the earth While chasing snails Molded by the heat of discontent Shaped by the urges heaven has sent Each side again unites And I have grown forward In this journey I call my life Throw your heart out in front of you |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
very fine piece! and happy for you in your victory through your struggle...to grow, that's what it's all about, eh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Shadow, Nice write, enjoyed the read |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and as the journey continues. . . the splits get bigger. . . well done. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
An example of another paradox... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yes, two sides coined very well. Our up and downs and all arounds. Enjoyed this much. Sincerely, Regina |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Thank you Virginia, yes, we learn as we go. Thanks Seymour, glad you enjoyed. Thanks Sven,I hope so there needs to be more space between yes and no. Thanks Mark, we have our own biult in yig and yang. Glad you enjoyed Ragina, every once in a while I have to flip the coin over and check! Throw your heart out in front of you And run out to catch it. ARAB PROVERB [This message has been edited by shadow974 (edited 08-29-2001).] |
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