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i didnt know who
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i fell in love with you, but you said i didnt know who... so i'll ask you, who loses out? me, for having loved and let go-- or you, for never letting go to love? -dgvarner 8-01 ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ "i believe we are here for a reason. as each day unfolds, we see less of the shadow and more of the sun" -unknown [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-28-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah...nicely questioned... nicely done... I enjoyed |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ohhh, this likes me very much... tough question..made me think though i profess to have no answers...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Very effectively formatted~ Nicely written~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
hmmmm, yep, very nicely done...just the right amount to make the reader think |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Great question, who has lost most? I bet you have the answer. Loved your poem. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Very interesting thought! My thought...he lost! hugs Cindi |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- I'm soooooo glad you're posting again! I've missed your poetry bunches!!! Though this one is a bit sad, I still am liking it lots. Very intriguing question, indeed... Love and hugs, ~Me "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
like it very much and also the presentation of this form......very nicely done. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Its a tough question. I seem to have the same problem. Letting go can be scary. Very nice write. Parker |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He's the loser....you know the old....... better to have loved and lost than......... I think there's a certain amount of truth in that don't you? enjoyable read! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
CPAT..thanks glad you enjoyed..KAILE..LOL @ you..i like you very much too my friend..thanks for stopping in MARGIE..thanks..its a little scattered aye..lol JELLYBEANS..i thank you much SHADOW..lol..i dont know if i have THE answer..but i have one.. thanks for reading..CINDI..thank you for your thoughts TRICKS..just a little ditty my heart picked out..  but i'm glad youre glad i'm here CHARISMA..thank you PARKER..but is letting go necessary..? or just an option? and who says, when that point is? ETHOME..yes..i do think theres A LOT of truth in that.. thanks for reading..VANDANA..glad you liked hugs, g [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-29-2001).] |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
dg, let me know when you find out the answer. Nice write.Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
MAEVE..i know only my answer, my friend..i think its gotta be an individual thing..lol but i think to never love is a tragedy.. thanks for reading me hugs, g |
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