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Vision of peace, the river.
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Vision of peace, the river. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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The river flows with freedom and beauty unsurpassed It paints its picture on the soul, to there forever last It gives us all the pleasures, which a mind with peace can bring The inner eye sweet company, our heart, the voice to sing |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Rick, I can totally relate to this. I think there is nothing more peaceful than sitting watching the river go by. Well done. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nicely stated! Thanks for the lovely flow of words! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick, I agree, well done. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rick~ There IS a quiet serenity in the flow~ Thank you for mirroring the thoughts of many~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Rick, this is very beautiful. Four simple lines, could possibly become a mantra for the soul....easily recited, memorizing same could hold joy.... well done Sir! |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Rick, The inner eye, sweet company..... Very lovely piece... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love your thoughts of the view with our inner eye Charisma |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very well done, peace and wisdom written here. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
There is something so magical about a river that you captured to a perfect peace. A keeper for sure. Hugs to you for being so kind and inspiring!  There is a beautiful old Hymn I used to sing in church. "Come Morning" I'll walk by the river. I'll rest neath the evergreen tree. Thanks for reminding me of this. Sincerely, Regina |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dee, thank you for your kind reply, when time permits, the pleasure gained from a river is both heart warming and gratifying. ethome, Thank you for your reply here and joining the word flow of words with the river. Seymore, thanks for giving my post a read and a kind reply. Marge, always nice to see your words, the pleasure is all mine to share this image. Dear Lady in White, thanks for your reply, I think that I have etched my soul with some memories and thoughts which I enjoy going back to. A Whisper's Caress, thanks for your reply and commenting on these few words, I enjoyed their finding of my pen and the thoughts they still instill within. Charisma, Thank you for your reply, our inner eye keeps us all close to our memories and thoughts that bring pleasure. Shadow974, thank you as well my friend, these lines came to me quickly, and still give me a smile, they are now the finishing lines of a posting called The river. To all of you my friends, again thank you.!!! Rick |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dee, thank you for your kind reply, when time permits, the pleasure gained from a river is both heart warming and gratifying. ethome, Thank you for your reply here and joining the word flow of words with the river. Seymore, thanks for giving my post a read and a kind reply. Marge, always nice to see your words, the pleasure is all mine to share this image. Dear Lady in White, thanks for your reply, I think that I have etched my soul with some memories and thoughts which I enjoy going back to. A Whisper's Caress, thanks for your reply and commenting on these few words, I enjoyed their finding of my pen and the thoughts they still instill within. Charisma, Thank you for your reply, our inner eye keeps us all close to our memories and thoughts that bring pleasure. Shadow974, thank you as well my friend, these lines came to me quickly, and still give me a smile, they are now the finishing lines of a posting called The river. Dear Regina, near left you out of my thank you list, have been reading heaps of your works, sorry not replying to all, thanks for your very, very kind words here, I am glad it has reminded you of a time and a hymn. Hope you are well and staying stress free as me. To all of you my friends, again thank you.!!! Rick |
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