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sans38
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0 posted 2001-08-26 12:28 PM



Lover...
Come slip between the sheets with me,
hold me close...kiss me tenderly.

Tease me...please me...
journey with me down the path to ecstasy.

Snuggle with me in the sweet afterglow,
until our wild heartbeats finally slow.

Stay with me throughout all of the night,
close to my heart...holding me tight.

As we drift towards sleep whisper in my ear...
tell me you love me and will always be here.

Let us awake at dawn...a new day to start,
sharing our love...together...never to part.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra Belisle - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2001-08-26 09:45 PM


This was such a beautiful piece of writing, filled with love and longing.  Take care..Sue

Suetang

DawnG
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2 posted 2001-08-26 10:08 PM


Sans38,

This is a wonderful piece of imagery here. I can only hope to be able to have that kind of love someday.

                    Dawn

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3 posted 2001-08-26 10:09 PM


very nicely done.

You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it.


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4 posted 2001-08-28 11:19 AM


Sandra~
This was lovely~
~*Marge*~

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ethome
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5 posted 2001-08-28 11:26 AM


Simply done but romantically familiar and warm!
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