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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-08-28 07:46 AM

Wish And Dust

I seed my Braille upon the brine
To feed the wind my poets line
To butt the ear in subtle hear.
To cut a wile and bring it near

To breeze and blow a sail to full
To wheeze a bag of pleasant wool
To coat a mind in rhyming rhyme
To boat a soul the sands of time

To write the words and hold the pen
To be the green within a glen
To glaze the eyes of flowers wile
To be the guile to bring a smile

And send it like a singing hymn
A poem like a jewelers gem
To buy a moments halt of time
And fly upon a rhythmic rhyme

This is a wish I wish my dust
It’s just a wish and not a must

serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-08-28 07:49 AM

"To be the guile to bring a smile"--I still say it's gotta be a lovely place in yer head, darlin'...

You are like a cup of poetic java, everyday....thank you!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-08-28 07:51 AM

Serenity,
And your answers are like honey in my tea. *L*

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-08-28 07:59 AM

"To buy a moments halt of time
And fly upon a rhythmic rhyme"

Ahhhhh ... and here's a sigh for you Sy, for halting a moment of my time so perfectly. Now you must know I loved the flow in this beautifully rhythmic piece. I love your style my friend. A lovely read, with wonderful phrasing throughout!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sunshine

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4 posted 2001-08-28 08:11 AM

While I wouldn't want anyone to force their intent on anyone else, sprinkle some of that wishing dust this way....for I would have some...

well done, Sy!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-08-28 08:22 AM

Kit,
A wonderful answer with wonderful comments throughout. *L* Sy

Sunshine,
You got it. *L*

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-08-28 09:24 AM

To breeze and blow a sail to full
To wheeze a bag of pleasant wool
To coat a mind in rhyming rhyme
To boat a soul the sands of time

To write the words and hold the pen
To be the green within a glen
To glaze the eyes of flowers wile
To be the guile to bring a smile

And send it like a singing hymn
A poem like a jewelers gem
To buy a moments halt of time
And fly upon a rhythmic rhyme
=====================================

Your poetry is a MUST for me
as necessary as raspberry tea
I must have daily doses of your rhyme
Your rhythm tis the ching of me chimes

Pour your poetry over me Stinky
and dont forget the *winkiewinkie*

me

** think of it like this...your poetry is Soul Food ...
youre like the Basic Food groups *L*
must have your rhymes to meet the daily minimum requirements for a healthy mind.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2001-08-28 09:42 AM

JM,
In that case I'll send Randy on a daily mission to you. Love ya Sy

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-08-28 10:02 AM

               "And send it like a singing hymn
                A poem like a jewelers gem
                To buy a moments halt of time
                And fly upon a rhythmic rhyme

                This is a wish I wish my dust
                It’s just a wish and not a must"

And what a delightful wish it is laddie! I'm impressed by the spirit of the whole work!

Martie

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California

9 posted 2001-08-28 10:22 AM

Sy--The poem in you always makes me glad that I can read!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2001-08-28 12:03 PM

Ethome,
And I'm impressed with your response. thank you.

Martie,
A wonderful bouquet, thank you *L*

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