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It's A Thor Point
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It's A Thor Point |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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It's A Thor Point ~*Marge Tindal*~  No shaded gray identity among the clouded shroud of sky Yet I hear the rumbling indignity light up the mist close by Lightning darts, missed-missiles thrown Defending hand from Thor himself Blinding loss paid in cost flash of denial on the shelf Roar of Thor Mjolnir heard and seen Black shrill of night ~ ignite Bolts bounce off the screen ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Liked it Marge!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Good paint enjoyed the write. *L* Sy |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm Thorry that you feel that way You hit a real Thor spot. I meant to come by on Thorsday But I Thoroughly forgot!!  (I'll do better....promise!!!)  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Thanks for the read and reply. Seymour~ Thankee, love~  Balladeer~ Thorsday was a thorn in my side, but I thortainly understand~ You Norse just the right things to say~  Thorougly yours~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You get hit by that lightning storm that rumbled through Kansas?...Sheesh, and GRINS.... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Splendid. Reminded me of the comic books I used to read when I was a young'n. I like the last stanza especially. You eat the brains of an old, wise man. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Love the flow of this  it rings out strong and powerfully as Thor himself would!Hugs, ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ LOL ! Actually the storm moved across the night sky in breathless inspire~ Allan~ Thank you. I'm so pleased to know you enjoyed it. SmittenKitten~ Thanks, hon. It was beautiful to behold~ And the sound effects were exquisite~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Sounds like quite a storm! Again...I'm liking where this new muse of yours is taking your poetry. Love it!  hugs, ~Me "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge you are so gifted...always know to suprise us with such lovely presentation, and this one is no exception! Love it... Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love that crazy Balladeer's comment...sorry... not to make fun Marge! It's an excellent poem but I know that if one of those lightning bolts hit you that it would a thor experience for sure.....Love it Marge! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love a good light show--you really painted this one up--almost shut down the pc! wonderful, Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ It was 'electric' ... ! Tee-Hee ! But, not on my side of the road ! Charisma~ Thanks, doll ! I love having you here~ ETHome~ LOL ! And I just love that Balladeer~ Thanks for enjoying ~ Serenity~ Thor-nuff ?  Hi gal ... good to see you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, I have a thing for electrical storms, so this I love. I am know to use roll after roll of film on them. And Thor is a favourite of mine too.Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 08-28-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ Thanks for peeking in on my little electrical display~ Love ya' gal~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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