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rwood
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0 posted 2001-08-26 07:17 AM


Well, It's 6 am.
She cried and whined and whimpered.
I walked her in morning mist and shadows
Straining to see her black and white

Without her, I wouldn't have seen
The sun come up this morning.
She and I on the front porch rocking
I've spoiled this little baby.
She yawned the wide mouth yawn
Of contentment. Belly up on my chest
Legs reaching straight up to heaven
Freckels displayed out to the world

I wish I could do that.

[This message has been edited by rwood (edited 08-26-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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1 posted 2001-08-26 07:51 AM


Dear Regina, a lovely poem and a very lucky puppy indeed. I must admit I don't see too many sunrises, our dogs are all near to the end of their teathers and sleep in longer than what I do.
I enjoyed the read.

Rick
Have a nice sleepin tomorrow.

paladin
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2 posted 2001-08-26 08:37 AM


A puppy is the only love you can buy.

paladin

Rex Allen McCoy
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3 posted 2001-08-26 09:12 AM


I can only think of a few things in life, nicer than a sunrise
That new day hug as the night silence shuts down to the music of life
I love puppies too ... mine's an older puppy now but she still loves her walks and she still tugs the leash with the greatest intent to go faster
I wrote a poem once about taking her for a walk ... her life's an adventure

you've spread some sparkle to some old memories ... can you tell?

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2001-08-26 09:47 AM


Rwood,
A delightful write, a delightful read.

walker
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5 posted 2001-08-26 11:40 AM


Beautiful puppy love.
VAS
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6 posted 2001-08-26 11:50 AM


beautiful puppy love
beautiful tender morning
enjoyed this greatly!

I often wish I could do the things my cats can do...up until the washing parts

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
7 posted 2001-08-26 12:12 PM


  puppies are so sweet.  My dog's getting up there in age but he's still eager to get me up in the morning!

Lovely poem, I enjoyed it  
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

cpalmer
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8 posted 2001-08-26 12:13 PM


Puppies are so wonderful aren't they! They make you see things you never would!  
Cindi

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9 posted 2001-08-26 01:44 PM


I do not reply to poems just to reply. When I do reply, I am truely moved. This short sweet simple little poem conveys so much with such a wonderful economy of words.

BRAVO !!

No one ever listened themselves into trouble.

[This message has been edited by The Lonely Stranger (edited 08-26-2001).]

rwood
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10 posted 2001-08-26 03:17 PM


Rick: Thanks for reading fellow soul. And for the sentiment.

Paladin: I love that. She is a good investment then.

Rex: Thank you so much. Our adventures are just beginning.

Seymour: Delighted by your comment! Thanks!

Walker: Isn't it great! I appreciate you.

VAS: LOL!~ You are too much. Yes, I can leave that part alone! Thank you!

SK: They bring so much in there limited time here with us don't they. Thanks Krista!

Cpalmer: Yes, like the time when you come home and they are delirious to see you. So glad you agree. Thanks Cindi!

TheLonelyStranger: I'm honored to meet you this way! Many thanks for your wonderful comment.

Sincerely,
Regina

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