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shadow974
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0 posted 2001-08-25 05:32 PM



Cares of the day

When sand castles
Form on your head
And start to weigh you down
It’s time to turn up the heat
And dry the sand
Then it will trickle down
And make a soft path for your feet

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

© Copyright 2001 Daniel Owens - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-08-25 07:57 PM


I love the wisdom in this! Very nice!
Sven
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2 posted 2001-08-25 09:13 PM


I never thought of that. . . what a wonderful poem. . .

great job. . .  

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ethome
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3 posted 2001-08-25 09:19 PM


Great idea...there's always a solution isn't there?  Good poem! Enjoyed!!
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