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Alien Me |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I may not come from planet far May not have lived on unnamed star But still I feel so out of place While wearing this, my alien face I speak your language but it seems You cannot understand my dreams My words don't pass your tangled mind We are no longer two of a kind When did you come to think of me As an alien in this land of free Do I need a green card to find The way to your closing mind |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
No green card, necessity. Just open heart, yours unto me.. together, friends on journey's foot will point out the things each overlooked... love you, s.o.s. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Like they say, "Women are from Venus, Men are from Mars!" I really enjoyed this one, as I sat here nodding in agreement!  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Love the title...makes me wonder how something/someone once known becomes a stranger. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon--loved the way you pointed out the frailty of a relationship, without saying failure. To show this way makes it easy see. Very well done! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I know how this feels. . . nice job. . . good to see you posting again. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're absolutely right - Sometimes we just don't recognize ourselves or who we are... Nicely done, PdV |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nicely done indeed! Great expression, Sharon! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
There's always more to learn about ourselves and others! This is very well written Sharon! |
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