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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Renaissance A cheering crowd caught within the confines of eyes reach. Velvet waves of thought pressing their feel, rising to meet, title me stolen in the arms of touch. Beyond the fairy tale, slipping into the night, one by one my dreams are deferred. I mind float the moment, thought-pauses stretching time, releasing today into tomorrow, at a snail's pace. I whisper my good-bye's into the night air allowing time to shadow me, 'til next we meet. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 08-24-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Beyond the fairy tale, slipping into the night, one by one my dreams are deferred. I mind float the moment, thought-pauses stretching time, releasing today into tomorrow love this passage... wish I had written it!!! nice work!!! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Cape of black, Pulled tightly despite the sun, Double tied So it won’t come undone, Watching the realms of velvet, Listening to the clanging of metal, And the clinking of a glass, Talking quiet to those now met, Beside the stones of ancient castle, Resting with wine on the grass. Drift me fore and back, Renaissance of times gone past, Where simpler things reside. Gloom |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent title for this piece Professor Gloom...what a grand reply  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wynter, Very up enjoyed the read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ My friend, this is good, VERY good ! 'title me stolen in the arms of touch' *smiles* at the imagery~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was so very beautiful. I felt myself being swept away in the romance of this. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully done Wynter. . . I love how this took me back. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you probably did C...somewhere in your poetry...*s thank you PGloom Cape of black, Pulled tightly despite the sun, Double tied So it won’t come undone, Watching the realms of velvet, Listening to the clanging of metal, And the clinking of a glass, Talking quiet to those now met, Beside the stones of ancient castle, Resting with wine on the grass. Drift me fore and back, Renaissance of times gone past, Where simpler things reside. loved it...we shall have to do this again sometime... ~smiling hoot_owl_rn- thank you *s Sy- I am always happy to see your words..thank you ~Wynter [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 08-25-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Maureen! Very nice work! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent work Wynter! "Beyond the fairy tale, slipping into the night, one by one my dreams are deferred. I mind float the moment, thought-pauses stretching time, releasing today into tomorrow, at a snail's pace. I whisper my good-bye's into the night air allowing time to shadow me, 'til next we meet." A very enjoyable read! I see you haven't lost your touch!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marge, thank you...you words are very kind hugsssss M Sue...romance is just what I had in mind *wink...thank you Sven...took you back..you are not thattttttttttt old *s Denise, I am glad you enjoyed my thoughts today..thank you for reading And you E...you always touch me with your kindness..thank you everyone ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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