Open Poetry #15 |
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A Kinder Place To Fall |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia ![]() |
![]() I've Made Some Changes. Dedicated To My Lifetime Friend...K.P. A Kinder Place To Fall I can't remember and I can't even recall A time I've ever felt a more tender moment at all Than when I take your face along when I dream There's nothing like the night to bring you closer to me... You have there in your hands the surest way together So, I hold true that feeling will last forever And, when nature is the way I find freedom within Then I see and I feel you with each breath I'm given... It's in your heart that I have learned to really believe That this moment in life was so meant to be And, I surely can't tell you that I've never been loved at all But, have I told you, My Friend, you're my kinder place to fall... I have seen a heartache one can hold a million times or two And, all the things I've asked God for he seemed to answer them with you Now, I can't surely tell you I have never loved at all But, I know the way to a greater days, you're my kinder place to fall... It seems I can find so many words when I close my eyes to dream But, each time I find my way to you, I find it hard to leave It's in your strength that I can stand for a moment on my own But, Friend, with you, I can take the fall, when nighttime finds me home... Now, I know sometimes even the strongest can cry, but I'd never do that to you I know what it's like to wake in the night, to wonder what you've just been through My friend, I am not him and I am not her at all I'm just one you can call on too and a kinder place to fall... Saun Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Saunni What a wonderful tribute to someone who is obviously a very important part of your life. We can never have too many friends and some are so very unique and selfless. Take care........Sue Suetang |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a lovely thing to write to your friend, who yes, obviously means a lot to you, but I can tell you must be a very important part of their life as well. Beautifully done Saunni. ~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that! |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just beautiful Saunni. . . wonderfully done. . . excellent words, and a great flow. . . not to mention that the feelings expressed are shared well. . . great job my friend. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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