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As A Shadow Of Fact
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As A Shadow Of Fact |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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As A Shadow Of Fact ~*Marge Tindal*~  Shadows hide in darkness of night Suppressed in fear of facing the light Should the pen of discovery shine Shadows hide not in verse or rhyme Shadows shattering in decline Split of seconds within short time Shaded in gray-mixed personalities Shadows on the wall of thee Shine of light sends shadows Sliding to the floor Surest sign that one can see Shadows are no more ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ What a perfect morning post...goodbye shadows, hello light!  Wonderful post Marge.Hugs, ~Krista  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Shadows on the wall. What a neat write! Deb |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Shadows are the by product of light. There could be no MoonShadow without Sunshine. Nice work... thought provoking as well as smile provoking. |
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KaziaRose Junior Member
since 2001-08-18
Posts 14Australia |
Mmmm Marge interesting piece, I liked very much. ~Kaz~ A mellifluous muse lies within this poet |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Just got up and just saw my shadow. I'm sure you slept with yours last night. Good morning sunshine. *L* Sy |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margie~ This is great, really enjoyed this one. somedays it's just not the shadows that slide...LOL ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Of all of the reasons for me to truly take this to my heart, you know each and every one! This is excellent, and in this, your art of poetry shows well... I would take a few more of these, please... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Enlightening, my friend... Very kewl poem..  |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
very refreshing piece marge! I'm beginning to love my shadows... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Marge, let me open my eyes first, I think I lost mine or you blotted it out with the sunshine of your bright words..very gentle smile |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I love the experimentation you have been doing lately, Marge! Very creative! Corinne |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, what can I add to what has already been said? Nothing but I liked it very much. And sometimes it's nice to chase away the shadows. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I too am really enjoying the different pieces you are doing Marge, this was great! If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very nice one here, sometimes we have to leave the shadows and step into the light and at other times it is wise to mingle in the shade and get to know all of ones self. Loved it! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ Thanks hon. And with the sun comes a different light to shed upon the shadow. BloomingRose~ Thanks, sweet lady. Good to see you again. MoonShadow~ How appropriately named you are. Intriguing to this poet that enjoys both the moon and the shadows~ KaziaRose~ I appreciate that ... thanks. Seymour~ LOL ! Well ... we'd both be in hot-water if I'd slept with yours !  Tracie~ Thanks for peeking in girlie~ Karilea~ Big hugs ... and you know~ Nan~ Thankee, sweet friend. Cottage~ Well ... LOL~ We don't have to 'love' em ... as long as we know their names ! Reminded me of 'The Shadow Knows' !  Logan~ LOL @ 'blot' ... Kinda of a 'Rorschachian' thing ! Corinne~ Thank you for your comments. Got a super-duper-sleuther of a new muse tending my inkwell ! Dee~ Thank you, sweetie~ Mysteria~ I am pleased to share the gifting of this new muse. She sheds 'new light' ...~ Shadows~ Another 'mirror' of the forums~ Getting to 'know' them is a good thing~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 08-20-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Very cool write, my friend! I DO love shadows, and this is wonderful! This one likes me lots! Lovin' this new muse of yours, I am.  Love ya, ~Me "...until you have read the verse on his |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Very subtle and clever and still profound... I like this one very much, me marge!!! Like great architecture...the construct is there without overwhelming...and the seeming simplicity underlined the "shadow" theme. I keep this one, for study. Love you back. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge, This is way cool! My shadow likes to follow me most of the time it seems, of course haven't seen it much in this heat...it just seems to melt away! Oh well...Love the imagery! Hugs Cindi |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ *Huggles* Iffen I got to pick a new 'shadow' tomorrow, I'd pick YOU ! You are sooooooooo much like me - Are you sure you aren't Ayrasela in shadow ? Serenity~ Thank you, gal friend~ It just came tip-toeing in~ Cindi~ LOL @ little puddles of you~ Thanks, gal. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Through windows of shadow time Left to dwell within your rhyme I lift my this heart to the night Summoned by the keeper of light ********************************** Funny, I could have sworn I saw YOUR shadow last night through my window. Were you protecting me again???? |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--you are becoming a poetic wonder...fresh and new and limitless, your muse so well equiped to enthrall. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ I've always got your back, babe~  gv ge yuhi~ Martie~ Thanks, lady~ I luv ya'  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
A true reflection of your poetic shadow. Exquisite read! Enjoyed the talent within this shadow. Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Gwendrina Junior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 33 |
Hi Marge, I love the play on words in the title only to be more delighted by the way you refract the essence of shadows into a temperament and mood. The second stanza for me really stood out!!! Lovely work!! Wendy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FlutterWings~ Thanks for the read and the lovely comments. GwenDrina~ I appreciate the read and the thoughtful reply. Welcome again to Passions ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FlutterWings~ Thank you so much. I've enjoyed this one too. A new muse ... a new thought~ GwenDrina~ I appreciate your read and reply. Thank you so very much. ~*Marge*~ *Whoops ! In my enthusiasm, I've thanked you twice ... might be time for bed, ya' think ??? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 08-24-2001).] |
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