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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-08-23 11:53 AM

I'll be
the one to hold you,
I'll be a dream,
That you can keep on dreaming
Into night,
I'll be the one(for you)
I'll be the light for you,
So that you can see the morning
In me,
I will be everything
that you wanted me to be,
Wilh all my heart,
I love you,
Will be everything you wanted me to be,
I will be your eyes
that you can see through,
I will be,
I will be the one,
I will be the one you need,
I will be holding ,
Holding as a time comes by,
I will be the one(for you)
I will be the song,
You can sing these words,
I will be everything......
Everything you want me to be....

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-23 11:55 AM

nice poem...and I am sure the one you are these things for.. will appreciate it.

I enjoyed!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-08-23 12:40 PM

Oh how lovely....how very romantic. Enjoyed it very much! Nancy Lee.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-08-23 12:44 PM

Oh,LittleVanDana~
You dance so gracefully through this waltz of words
from your heart.
Beautiful, dear.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

GracefullyPoetic
Junior Member

since 2001-08-23

Posts 14
AZ, USA

4 posted 2001-08-23 12:50 PM

I really enjoyed this poem. It had so much life and passion in it. Please keep posting. This was a wonderful poem, and should be shared with the world. It's obvious you are in love, and for that, I am happy for you. I am also, and will be posting some poems I wrote for my boyfriend.

I look forward to reading many more poems that you have written.

You are a very talented poet. Never give up your marvelous gift of poetry;it comes to you so naturally!Thanks for sharing. I hope to continue to see you post more of your work. I love admiring another poet's hand at work in art.

--Heather

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-08-23 06:29 PM

I'll be the light for you,
So that you can see the morning
In me,

I love these lines..*s

could be a poem in the brewing..

~wynter

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-08-23 10:09 PM

it's just like a song my friend. . . and, of course. . . you sing it very well. . .

wonderful. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

7 posted 2001-08-24 12:30 PM

vandana, simply beautiful! I so loved this!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

8 posted 2001-08-24 12:19 PM

Beautiful and romantic poem.

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