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Open Poetry #15

An Instant Attraction

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-23 10:33 PM

The attraction to you was instant
Right from the moment I met you
You would so easily make me smile
Whenever you came into view

This relationship we share
I feel is really quite unique
Should I apologise to you
For these feelings that run so deep?

I tried hard to hide my feelings
But my heart didn't seem to care
My days seemed so much brighter
Whenever you were there

Should I hang my head in shame
For the way you've made me feel?
Should I walk away right now
As if none of this were real?

But my heart won't let me go
Because for you so much I care
My heart would display a 'vacant' sign
If ever you weren't there

So if it's all the same to you
I think I'd like to stay around
As I bloom within your radius
And within this special love I've found

Suetang

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

1 posted 2001-08-23 10:47 PM

once love takes ahold, there's just no way to let go, very good poem.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2001-08-24 12:04 PM

Suetang, what a beautiful write. Always hold on to what you love.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-08-24 02:56 AM

Fantastic - you captured the feelings of new love with intensity perfectly Sue, great write.

~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-08-24 04:35 AM

know this feeling..makes it wonderful to awake each morning...nicely done

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-08-24 08:40 AM

hold on tight...and always respect and appreciate the one you love.. nicely done Sue..I enjoyed the read and the thoughts

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