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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-08-23 06:24 PM

In a moment
My existance
Entirely turned

Happiness and love
Bestowed
Insight
To
My mistakes

You

I will never
Forget

(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

[This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (edited 08-23-2001).]

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-08-23 06:28 PM

Hey, welcome back!!! This is a great one. I like it lots.
Sandra

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-08-23 06:31 PM

lovely writing, Mark

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-08-23 06:40 PM

Specifically...this is great.

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2001-08-23 07:09 PM

Thank you much for the hearty "welcome back", Sandra. Just a quick drop-in... Glad you enjoyed.

Wynter, thank you kindly.

Thanks, Duncan... it's just another ripple in the stream of my consciousness... Glad you liked.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-08-23 10:24 PM

Hey Mark!

Happy to see you.

Your love light is shining in this! Makes everything clearer doesn't it. Special indeed.

Sincerely,
Regina

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-08-23 10:41 PM

So much said....in so few words. Great! I love your style.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-08-24 03:01 AM

Welcome back, nice entrance, and well done.

~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ hmmm...they were smart whomever said that!

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

8 posted 2001-08-24 09:07 AM

Welcome Back Mark.......

We missed you.....

So much said......I loved it.

Thank you
*****************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

9 posted 2001-08-24 11:47 AM

Hi Regina -- thanks for the smile and friendly words.  Yes, I prefer to see this poem through your eyes, and indeed, it is a definite facet, but it has another point of view in there as well...

Enchantress:  thank you for the positive affirmations...  I must admit -- I rather enjoy this style too in comparison to my more traditional and regimented form.  Thank you for the read and reply.

Mysteria:  thank you for the "welcome back" and very kind words -- they mean a lot to me.

My Melody:  thank you too for the very kind sentiments -- they touch me in all the right places.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

10 posted 2001-08-24 04:39 PM

I like the way I could look at this in any mood, and see the words twist along...

well done Mark!

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

11 posted 2001-08-24 04:44 PM

My Lady -- then you too see beyond the obvious... Thank you.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2001-08-25 04:12 PM

Nice words...James

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

13 posted 2001-08-26 07:14 AM

er, does this mean if i start to love more, i will come to terms with my failures more graciously....

love the way your short poems set me thinking wacky thoughts

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

14 posted 2001-08-26 11:00 AM

Very Good!

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

15 posted 2001-08-26 02:45 PM

Thank you, James.

Faterider -- absolutely, assuming you're open to seeing, understanding, and applying the wisdom to be obtained from having loved... I'm glad you're enjoying this series, and as long as my poems "set you thinking", then all is well.

Connie, thank you.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

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