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Clear Tones
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Clear Tones |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Clear Tones last night I heard the serenade of two hearts in beat and breath replacing the song of loneliness in disappearing defeat with this new lullaby the music of a different ache not the one of empty but the one hearts touching makes it is the symphony of our souls the song we long to hear yes I heard the song last night whole notes played tone clear "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Whole notes played clear. a very descriptive image here... one I liked a lot!!! As Usual... very nicely done...and I enjoyed the upbeat feel of it.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
damn...I feel like such a voyeur! Makes my heart soar...there is much "peace" about this day--(pluto went direct--  ) Enjoyed, Lady. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
whole notes played tone clear Like this a lot, but especially the vividness of these two lines...great ending! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very nice, love the 'wanting' feel to your poems....i miss that in mine...sigh |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
the music of a different ache not the one of empty but the one hearts touching makes WOW! This was fantastic! ~*Homepage*~ http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/722155 |
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