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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Intriguing ideals Come from lips that are sealed tight Against all desire [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 08-23-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ooh, nice work. I think this is a very unique senryu because of the subject matter... it's rare for that kind of thing to be put into this format. More often I see this format being used for imagery, and not a statement like this one does... Quite interesting, and a good write.  I'm impressed.Oh and the ellipse in the title makes a nice effect. ~Allan You eat the brains of an old, wise man. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you Allan...for a young man, you have an old, knowledgeable soul... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and this IS intriguing---hmmmm...I'd say more? but?  My lips are sealed too!  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
mumble mumble mumble...( trying to talk through sealed lips) (using sign language) An intriguing write... and thoughts worth sharing indeed... I enjoyed... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 My lips are sealed too |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Against all desire...Amen. Love this. |
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